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Essay pre-writing

 * This photo shows a tornado coming out from a man's hand. * Thesis - This photo portrays how human are killing the planet and causing climate change.

Revise paragraphs

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Revisions Paragraph

1. Setting In the middle of the Atlantic Ocean, It was cloudy and foggy outside. You couldn't see anything out. You could hear the sound of the waves coming from miles away. You could hear something moving down the water but don't know what it is. You can see the darkish blue sky looking down on the ocean. You could feel how cold it is by seeing your breath and noticing that you're in the middle of nowhere. Then you come out of the water with your right hand holding a bright yellow torch to see where you're going. 2. Plot Richard was on vacation with his family on a boat when they had an accident in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. Richard had three kids, two boys, and one daughter. The kids were young between the ages of five to Eleven. His wife, Mary, was nowhere to be found when the accident happened. Before the accident occurred, they were all together playing music and dancing on the boat. It was a little cold and windy outside. The music that they were pla...

Paragraphs

1. Setting In the middle of the Atlantic Ocean, It was dark, and there is nothing to see, you could hear the sound of the waves coming from miles away. You could hear something moving down the water but don't know what it is. You can see the blue sky looking down on the ocean. You could feel how cold it is and notice that you're in the middle of nowhere. Then you come out of the water with your right hand holding a bright yellow torch. 2. Plot Richard was on vacation with his family on a boat when they had an accident in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. Richard had three kids, two boys, and one daughter. The kids were young between the ages of five to Eleven. His wife, Mary, was nowhere to be found when the accident happened. Before the accident occurred, they were all together playing music and dancing on the boat. It was a little cold and windy outside. The music that they were playing on the boat attracted some creatures down the sea to move close to the surface. One...

Figurative Language

Simile - My twin is like a loose change Metaphor - My twin is a tress Personification - My twin's feet screamed out help Hyperbole - My twin is the best sister in the Universe Onomatopoeia - My twin always likes to bark Alliteration - My twin taught the class Assonance - My twin is little and interesting Consonance - The twin talks to TREYWAY

Action Verbs

1. Ate - I ate a lot of food 2. Danced - I danced at a party 3. Ran - I ran on the track 4. Played - I played soccer 5. Jumped - I jumped over a box 6. Packed - I packed my clothes to come back to school 7. Walking - I walked my dogs out 8. Shopped - I shopped for Christmas gifts 9. Partied - I partied in Florida with friends 10. Read - I read a script 1. I see a man's hand sticking out of the ocean with a torch 2. He was on ship when he got into a shipwreck and had to go under the water to get a torch 3. He will come out with the torch to use it as a signal for rescue Describe what you see: 1- Nouns -fire 2- Swam 3 - Man 4 - Blue/Yellow 5 - The ocean and the blue sky 6 - smell of fish, hear the sound of the waves, touch of cold water, and smell of fish and fresh air 7 - Scary 8 - The sky is blue